[ Why Do You Feel The Need To Hide ]
[ The Scars ]
[ From The Wounds, That Are On The Inside? ]
[ It Is Because Those Are The One’s That Hurts
The Most ]
[ The Nerves Could Be As Fried As Burnt Toast ]
[ Ready To Crumble Or Break ]
[ Easy To Make ]
[ Not Easy To Fake ]
[ Covered By Lies ]
[ Not Easily Seen By Others Eyes ]
[ The Scars Are Hidden For Reasons Only You Would
Know ]
[ They Will Be Hidden By Layers Of Clothes So They
Don’t Show ]
[ It Is Not That You Are Embarrassed That They Are There ]
[ There Is Always A Story Behind Them ]
[ That You Don’t Care ]
[ To Share ]
[ The Scars Are Jagged & Deep ]
[ The Memories Of What Caused Them ]
[ Won’t Let You Sleep ]
[ You Fight Through The Nightmares That They Caused ]
[ Waiting To Hit The Play Button ]
[ After Your Life Was Put On Pause ]
[ Do The Days Ever Get Any Better? ]
[ Do The Clouds Ever Change The Weather? ]
[ The Answer Is Always ( YES ) ]
[ Sometimes You’ll Have To Clean Up This Mess ]
~ The End ~
[ Mahalo ]
[ A hui hou aku ]
[ Na ]
[ Lopaka DeVoe ]
(1127)▪︎[ Those Inside Scars … 12•20•2020 ]
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Lopaka's Poetic Stories Blog 
I like to think that the days do in fact get better. Especially if you have the right people in your corner.
I believe that people hide their scars because people do not want to hear the “I am so sorry”. We as human’s mask our scars because we do not always want sympathy, where individuals who hear our stories feel sorry for them. Rather if a person does choose to show their scars and reveal their truth, it is a significant weight that is constantly being carried by keeping personal matters locked away.
I liked how your ending brought everything full circle, since your story had so many questions and you concluded with an answer.
Wonderful job!
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I Love Your Comments. They Are Helpful In My Growth To Be A Better Person & Writer.
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There are some scars that are too painful to ever see the light of day and share with anyone. They must be dealt with personally and allow oneself to heal privately.
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That Is Spot On. Thank You For The Comment.
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